Chronicle of Soul

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *peace*child*, Feb 21, 2005.

  1. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

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    Death is stagnation
    Life is progression
    Obsolete is the plague
    Of eternal transgression
    Majestic wings, vast as the ocean of time
    Awaking from slumber
    Deliver me from the cesspool of degradation
    Tearing my soul assunder
    Lay my soul on the grass of far-off lands
    Where the sun mght bathe its scars
    And extract the beauty from my winter-worn eyes
    Carrying it to the ever-present stars
    Moonlight dancing through the leaves
    Of evergreens sighing in the autumn breeze
    Where the cares of this world cannot reach me
    Can you take me there?
    I've heard the songs of better days
    They've called out from the misty mountains
    Of those places, and I don't care for turning away
    Music fills the void of soul
    We dance amongst the fields of amber glory
    The children walk with fairy hand-in-hand
    In a far-off land more joyous than even I can understand
    Lost boys, your voices sound with triump
    You've cheated death and sadness
    And trapped lightning in a bottle of mirth
    Where I may drink and toast the twighlight of despair
    Sipping wine, engaged in reveries
    With tired stars now soon to slumber
    We talk and laugh of days gone by
    When my soul had wept dust tears for its own descent

    Like this poem? Leave me a comment and check out my other poems in the thread titled From the Heart...I would love to hear what u guys think..thanks so much! Love and peace...
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I used to be one fantasy reading fool. I don’t know if you’ve read the lord of the rings, but the way he describes elven parties; this poem takes me to that same place, minus the elves, of course. Thanks!
     
  3. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    With tired stars now soon to slumber
    We talk and laugh of days gone by
    When my soul had wept dust tears for its own descent
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    My brain refuses to concentrate, but these lines caught my eye especially. Thanks
     
  4. kidder

    kidder Member

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    'We dance amongst the fields of amber glory
    The children walk with fairy hand-in-hand'
    These two lines sing! The poem opens heavily and awkwardkly and then lines like these two begin to appear. Know your strength, bathe in its glory and start from there.
     

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