description of a face to love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by cassiopeia, Feb 22, 2005.

  1. cassiopeia

    cassiopeia Member

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    dark eyes,
    fringe,
    dimples,
    freckles and
    white teeths.

    blond hair,
    wet...
    light make-up.
    a stripe from
    a tear.

    in the middle,
    your nose sunburnt.

    your eyes sparkle
    of joy and happiness.
    the summer's here.
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Summer provides a thousand faces to love. And your choice too! Like the flow here. Crisp, striking images. Write on!
     
  3. cassiopeia

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    thanks..i'll post some more when i've written something more in english:) got to go back writing...:)
     
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