1. the unicorn so pure, the beauty is here the unicorn hiding between trees laying bleeding the blood pure silver the unicorn dead the beauty is gone 2. unicorn white, long and lanky galloping... unicorn the endless beauty? do you hear it? the sound, the endless sound... ...of a unicorn dancing. i'm a bit unsure of this two poems...should i rewrite it into one? make some changes with the words?? i wrote this a half year ago and i got a feeling i need to change it a bit..anyone who got some ideas?? i would be glad for all replies..positiv or negativ...just tell me what you think..ok?? luv
