poem by Alex Surry

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by o0child_at_nature0o, Feb 28, 2005.

  1. o0child_at_nature0o

    o0child_at_nature0o Member

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    Hello everybody.this is a poem my friend Alex just finshed, while she was at work i might add:sunglasse, and i thought it was really cool and quite funny.So just wanted to share it with you guys.feed back welcome :) enjoy.....



    Circle seated at the center of the open air venue,
    the host the focus of our attentions.
    For us, he'd flaunt his trade,

    example the perfection of his art.

    Determination creased his brow,

    as our man of the hour took up the tools of his craft,

    Nestled them in his lap.

    We witnessed then as he concocted a mixture divine,

    Neatly and professionally crafted a wafer light structure,

    More beautiful......

    Than I've yet to lay eyes on.
    Set ablaze, aromatics intoxicating us,

    the artisan smiled triumphant, taking his rights.

    Tokes well, he said... Tokes well

    The classy joint by Alex Surry

    sorry about the lay out thats my falt not her's:)

     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    lol. wicked
     
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