Haiku for vegetarianism

Strange meat eating girl
if you stop I will write you
a poem every day.

 

*grins and giggles*

 

Since you write better
Than animals taste, I will
Give up just for you

(Oh and you had six syllables in your last line - naughty Bhaskar!)

 

never! im gonna go eat a steak now......

 

nice haiku by the way

 

I wrote every, but I was thinking ev'ry

 

Nice little expression of veggieness. I'm afraid I haven't much experience with haikus. What's the formula? 5-7-5?

 

this was nice..i can't write haikus..but this was good. they're really short then...i think i need more than three lines to express myself. but you can do it..so keep on doing it.. luv bro..

 

Oh, okay then. In that case you are forgiven. And I went into a chicken restaurant today, ordered some chicken - substitute bean thing...I can't say I cared much for the taste, but I was proud to have planted the seeds of my vegetarianism, which I hope will grow into an animal - friendly flower! X

 

Heal your heart
one bite at a time, dearest.
God bless you.

 

I think I missed out on posting one yesterday...*thinks*

Shall I kiss you or
psychedelicately paint
colors on your smile?

 

friends aren't food
I like myself more today
and more tommorow.

 

seriously, though, that's not a haiku at all, read Dharma Bums by Kerouac, then read Kerouacs book of Haikus.
here's one

shit writer
urinating thoughts

read a poetic masterpiece, "Gifted Disabilities" by Justin blackburn. its on www.booksurge.com, read it now, and you'll have no problems writing after that. its broken the mold, peoples.

 

seriously though, i just dug deeper into you peoples haiku shit. they're not even haikus, they're just american three line dorky phrases. you gotta capture something people, and you gotta do so by making the reader see something in their head besides a bucket of shit. it's gotta ring, it's gotta stop, but it can't ever stop, know what i mean. it's the paradox of writing down and unstateable moment. get it, and you got it.

 

vegetarian haikus:

biting the remnants
where a soul once perched

untimely demise
animal lava
unseen eruption

chewing cudd
to being chewed

fear the slaughter
leave it for the ingestors

 

ok so its not haiku. Personally, I dont care much for Kerouac. I sure as hell am not gonna go around reading books to teach me how to write, because I write spontaneously. Every single one of your poems, while being effective images, were quite distant to what I wished to convey and why I started this thread at all. If you dont like the "shit" I write, then don't read it.

 

tell them tell them

today i decided i won t even give an opportunity for meat eaters to
concider me as friend
my contibution

don t eat me
i have feelings
like cows have

 

I have no great animosity against meat eaters. I disagree with their choices, but I know far too many wonderful omnivores to hate them.

Todays poem:

My mind seems frozen
The world is in slow motion
It all seems so strange.

 

*smiles*

Casper

 

do not hate
because I eat meat
i'm not bad

I do it because
I can not survive without
I am quickly ill