I saw you baby, thinking your x-ray eyes were disguised, that your glare would pass by as a passing glance, hidden by the distance between you and I, but oh no, I got your kind memorized, yeah, plus I recognize that perfume drifting across this dirty local: wild Arabian myrrh like a beckoning belly-dancer dressed in sheer pastels, bells on her ankles and wrists ringing in harmless feminine guile. yeah, I seen that style. Pull on that cigarette one more time like it’s me and you’re benign, then shake your hips and hike your hem and don’t you dare pretend, yeah, that those horns weren’t there to begin, pushing your pretty curls aside cos honey, yeah, I know your kind; I’ve slept with the antichrist’s concubine and that horned bitch acted just like you, promising the world’s wildest ride, that we’d rise up into andromeda, yeah, to live like Olympian gods, yeah and sleep in the sweet folds of space/time fabric. So don’t come over here with your honey-suckle tongue, your black-widow breath, your basilisk eyes, cos yeah, I know your kind. *I don't really know how good this is, since it was just written and I'm on cold medicine, which makes me go loopy. Anyway, yeah...
i enjoyed reading this alot when people reveal who they are not of their own fault..they play there part.............. i love this line you have written i recognize that perfume drifting across this dirty local... how your senses have come into this poem/ love npeace from saff
what kind of cold medicine you on? can i have some......my fave line, 'and don't you dare pretend, yeah, that those horns weren't there to begin'
I think this has a wicked barb to it. It's decadent, bitter smelling and sexy. NOt your greatest but an indulgent ride anyways.
i LOVE it!!! especially: "then shake your hips and hike your hem and don’t you dare pretend, yeah, that those horns weren’t there to begin, pushing your pretty curls aside cos honey, yeah, I know your kind; I’ve slept with the antichrist’s concubine." *feels around for her devil-horns*
I sort of agree with hippievixen, the second stanza really made me lick my lips, so sensual and lovely, mmm...
Enjoyed this alot~! Loved that whole, don't even try to pretend yer something yer not, I see you thing. Thanks sweety.