my endless death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by meduza, Mar 9, 2005.

  1. meduza

    meduza Member

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    My endless thoughts are in a dream
    the waves the cure
    the pill the end, so what it seems
    The pill the end my friend is dead (R.I.P)
    My mind is my savior; it will never "Tell no more, no more"
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    good use of rhyme and ouch, sad maybe?
     
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