i still love you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mysti, Mar 10, 2005.

  1. mysti

    mysti Member

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    after all the pain you put me through,
    i still love you.
    how can this be true?
    you lied to me,
    im bleeding,
    dieing,
    screaming,
    and pouring my soul out,
    but i still love you.

    deceived,
    robbed,
    cheated on,
    betrayed,
    why do i still love you?

    hunting you down,
    i seek your face,
    i just want one trace.
    you're avoiding me, yes i know,
    but through the pain to me you had shown,
    true love prevails.
    i forgive you,
    please listen to me,
    im not the only one deceived.

    she tricked you into those awful deeds,
    she is the root of an evil seed.
    she lied to you to get at me,
    cant you see?
    it wasnt you,
    she hurt me.

    my love for you is stronger than ever,
    i want to be with you now and forever
    please talk to me again,
    you know im still your friend.

    if only i could see you now,
    i would explain my feelings to you,
    and i wouldnt ask how you could have done this.
    there is no reason for you to apologize,
    just talk to me.

    i will probably never see you again,
    you're beating yourself up to much,
    dont you know i still love you?
    i just want to see you once more,
    answer my call,
    im crying out to you.

    if only if only what else can i do?
    how do i get you to know i still love you?
    please answer my distress call,
    without you i will surely fall.


    how did oy u guys like that one? if only i could get him to hear it, maybe we could start over brand new:(
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I've said it before- don't fall for users. It's an eloquent poem but you're wasting your breath. Give your heart to someone who'll respect and appreciate it. I know they're dull but they're also real, they're authentic.
     
  3. Lily-flower

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    dude that poem rocked! im a writer too. just joined the site the names lily-flower. cant believe your only 13. thats sophisticated writin for a 13 year old. keep flowin the poetry! x
     
  4. mysti

    mysti Member

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    thanks i try hard, i write many song also.
     
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