Translation help needed!

I can't delete it myself, so, please, delete it.

 

It's not that bad, but it would sound a little better this way:

Mi ángel. Este es mi pequeño obsequio para tí. No pude hacerlo yo mismo, entonces unas buenas persona de España, de una fábrica llamada Bordados Foronda de Sevilla, lo hicieron por mí. Espero que te guste! Feliz Cumpleaños!

 

well done eye n mind.... but shouldnt persona actually be personas,,, since the rest of it is done in plural form?

 

yes, that's right, it's for sure a little type error.

 

Buh, yeah, i didnt notice that.. I'm useless

 

no llorras amiga

 

I guess you meant "no llores amiga"

no juego mas.

 

Wouldn't it be better if it was estoy than este. i really don't know, but i thought estoy would be correct in this situation.

 

sorry but "estoy" is "i am" so it doesn't make sense, if you meant that "esto" would be correct, maybe it's ok, but as eye & mind said, it sounds better as she wrote.