here is a poem I wrote a long time ago, so here it is Sleep and Death Sleep is just a tiny taste of death If we fear death why don't we fear sleep When we sleep we are in a death-like state for hours upon hours Also in that death-like state we dream, maybe in death We just dream forever so what do you guys think?
ever so slightly morbid. Gets me thinking though, coz in psychology we're doing about sleep and dreaming and there's a disorder in which you seem to be dead, but not forever, just for a brief moment. they have these scanner things called EEG's and they read your brain waves and stuff, that's how they tell whether you are really asleep or just faking it, or in fact dead. Yay! I am learning, my brain is working again! anyhoo, your poem the zen-man puck: morbid, beautifully written, simple and effective. It's good. How old were when you wrote it?
hey nice poem, im kinda opposite though, i fear sleep but i welcome death, or atleast i used to. some of the sweetest things in life are the simplest
