a little poem by confusion

Discussion in 'Love and Sex' started by TomDijon, Mar 14, 2005.

  1. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    Wallowed in the melting snow
    these cold hard feelings froze my flow
    swallowed whole; it feels too slow
    planted in winter, will it ever grow?
    and it had seemed like the last frost had passed
    and I know see I swallowed much too fast
    and it had seemed like our destiny: her sail, my mast
    I never once thought that it might not last
    did we forget the rope? did we forget the ship?
    or am I just on her radar as one more blip?
    my new goal in life is to feel her lips!
    and to enter her soul through the touch of our tips!
    the butterfly no longer flutters below but now in my mind where the questions bestowAndEndlessBarageOfThingsICan'tKnowINeedHerToTellMe; should I hold on
    o r l e t g o...
     
  2. reincarnatmenowK

    reincarnatmenowK Member

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    awe that is very good ..makes me feel for that person
     
  3. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    did u post it in the poetry forum too? it would be a nice addition
     
  4. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    when you say that person do you mean her, or me? and thank you, but the poetry forum moves far too fast for me, no one gets the chance to read my stuff there cause too many people post their own stuff. i figured it would be better appreciated here. Should I start my own column in the poetry forum? I have a lot of work i'd really like for other's to read...
     
  5. reincarnatmenowK

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    Def both of you...and yes you should post your words any way you can
     
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