Empty Station

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by browneydgrl, Mar 15, 2005.

  1. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    you left me standing in the station
    a few stops back, it was midnight
    as i watched your train pull away
    and wondered how far home was
    how much longer it would take
    for my sun to rise
    so i could choose the clearest path
    away from your mistake and my heartbreak
    home to a new love, to a fresh start
    to spill some ink on another page of my open book

    the empty station watched me turn away
    after your train was out of sight
    poised on the last step with a breath of hope
    that died alongside my echoing footsteps
    when i realized you would not be back that night
    so i wandered down the only path that
    reminded me of you; a familiar sign
    in the midst of such desertion
    and i needed to get back to me
    before there was a me and you, to find myself
    on the lonely road and catch my own train home
     
  2. make art not war

    make art not war Member

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    did this really happen to you
     
  3. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Really, really enjoyed this one of yours, thanks sweety~!
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    This was great… so raw, and it seems to have a speechless or shocked emotion that creeps out in parts, like here:


    Yeah, that’s a familiar feeling…
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    yeah, I think this one owned me after that line.
     
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