Frauen

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippibillie, Mar 16, 2005.

  1. hippibillie

    hippibillie Member

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    She is the sun​
    and the moon​
    Sitting in her rocking chair​
    singing ancient tunes​

    Hair so fair​
    like winter wheat​
    by the fire​
    light shimmering heat​

    Tales are told​
    another begun​
    tell me of ​
    when the earth was young​

    Eyes blue like sky​
    draw me in​
    spirits fly​
    and we are one​

    Now i hold her​
    close to me​
    the bruise of dawn​
    as tears fall silently​

    Not wanting to admit she is gone........​
     
  2. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    beautiful, but Id drop the last line. it ruined it completely for me.
     
  3. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

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    i liked it...

    for me, i see it as the girl dies are the end, but i am probobly wrong
     

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