hi i need help!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jrqwnhip, Mar 19, 2005.

  1. jrqwnhip

    jrqwnhip Member

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    hi i need help cumin up with a poem i kinda started it:

    why is it that war overpowers peace?
    hate over love?
    sadness over happiness?
    destruction over rebirth?

    ok now i needed the otha stazas if sum1 wod b kind enuf 2 help me cont'd

    PeaCe aNd LovE
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    all i have to offer is this

    war is a cause of capitalism
    is breeds pain and missery
    not may live to tell its tall,
    old ,memories.........
    the hate you speak of
    beaten back our love
    this is misunderstandings
    we created by the above................


    thank you
    from saff

    today i was marching from speakers corner
    in london uk
    with the socialists party im a memeber, activist
    you see........
    the anti war march
    we sang danced and played
    music while we marched upon mr blair
    and hopefully more of these activities
    will end all missery and despair.

    love n peace.........
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I'd help you but I need a start that's a unit or block. Something with a distinctive cadence or a rhyme scheme. Your start is too disjointed for me to be of any assistance. I know what your theme is. I want you to do some work before I do.
     
  4. jrqwnhip

    jrqwnhip Member

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    hi...ok well thats the thing, im horrible at poetry i really duno how 2 rite it at all...but yea i want 2 rite sunfin that has 2 do with peace (its 4 skul 4 poetry month) ok i ll try workin on it...
     

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