hi i need help cumin up with a poem i kinda started it: why is it that war overpowers peace? hate over love? sadness over happiness? destruction over rebirth? ok now i needed the otha stazas if sum1 wod b kind enuf 2 help me cont'd PeaCe aNd LovE
all i have to offer is this war is a cause of capitalism is breeds pain and missery not may live to tell its tall, old ,memories......... the hate you speak of beaten back our love this is misunderstandings we created by the above................ thank you from saff today i was marching from speakers corner in london uk with the socialists party im a memeber, activist you see........ the anti war march we sang danced and played music while we marched upon mr blair and hopefully more of these activities will end all missery and despair. love n peace.........
I'd help you but I need a start that's a unit or block. Something with a distinctive cadence or a rhyme scheme. Your start is too disjointed for me to be of any assistance. I know what your theme is. I want you to do some work before I do.
hi...ok well thats the thing, im horrible at poetry i really duno how 2 rite it at all...but yea i want 2 rite sunfin that has 2 do with peace (its 4 skul 4 poetry month) ok i ll try workin on it...