in the world

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by borut16, Mar 21, 2005.

  1. borut16

    borut16 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    in the world
    of the

    (fanfares)


    B I G

    (applause)
    and
    the small
    (people walk on)

    it is
    quite
    HARD
    to be.

    and to think.

    cogito, ergo sum.


    sheep manipulated people
    don't exist

    -and my-
    WOOLEN jumper
    keeps on warming me...
     
  2. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    i dont really understand the poem but there is no doubt that you have a unique style that ive never seen before. creativity and originality is a good thing (especially in poetry)
     
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