i can't put my finger on just what it is about this piece, but i really really like it! you have some excellent lines in here talk like i think...
the second half really sped up for me. the first seems to meander along, calm and quiet, and then the second part... BOOM! wake up! and what an...
lovely imagery... like a train of thought floating out on a cool breeze... calming and wonderful. tanks for sharing!
there are some gramatical issue with this that sort of make it difficult to read, but i dig the vibe it sends! it almost sounds... unfinished....
not going to lie, the first piece isn't really to my taste. well written, without a doubt, but not something i particular enjoyed reading. i did,...
this left me hanging on a sigh. very nice imagery in this, and an almost... calming effect... :) tank you for sharing this. it was very much enjoyed!
excellent rhythm in this, man! truly wonderful! alot of people can't rhyme, and make it sound smooth, but this... bravo! easy rhymes and good...
*blush blush* tanks so much for your kind replies everyone! they are very much appreciated. :) and Jack, yes. i wrote this about the Lady...
welcome, and i hope to see ya around sometime! :D
'ello, dylan! welcome! hope to see ya around sometime. :D
very interesting indeed. abstract and well penned. tank you for sharing! enjoyed very much.
like i said, all i've ever had was the christina. my advice? if you can, get something else! the christina is cute, but that's it. it won't do a...
strong coffee (lots of sugar!!), a cigarette, bagel w/cream cheese, and some fruit (strawberries and citrus fruits, pref!). tee hee
Underneath a pale full moon, I dance and twirl to my Mother’s tune Of wind and whispered secrets kept— Of dreams untold and tears unwept— Of...
when why even bother responding? didn't your mother ever tell you that if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all?
oh, it's entirely gramatically correct. just takes a bit of a twisted look to get through it. deffinitely one of those "brain confusers"... tee hee
LOL oh, dear. i do believe i made an error... i think it may be, instead, www.myspace.com/tatkins0n... sorry about that. ha ha will go fix it now.
well, besides some gramatical errors, and a lack of any and all punctuation (mind you, this is a personal preference... i find it makes a poem...
oh, what lovely imagery, and what a well expressed feeling! that feeling of perfect peace and balance upon sight of Nature's magesty... tank you...
had the christina for a while, and it's no more painful than any other piercing down there. i would recommend shaving, just because it would be...
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