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    i need your feedback and help

    I preferred version 2 personally. I agree with TwoDogs but I think it adds a sort of desperation to it. The list and lack of punctuation make you...
    Post by: Fates_PD, Mar 19, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Step!

    I wrote this a while back whilst times were hard and depression high so quite deep but I hope still enjoyable... STEP! You've said I'm happy...
    Post by: Fates_PD, Mar 19, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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