thank you! i still can't help but to hear that song every time i read it, but i think i like it. i'm not entirely sure yet, but thanks! it still...
so i've had this song called land locked blues by bright eyes stuck in my head. every time i start to write this poem the tune and rhythm come...
thanks... but the beginning feels all awkward. and no matter how i re-do it it doesnt feel quite right
I'm not sure what to do about the first half... I don't quite like it. Help? There have been many humble days Tucked here and high away Of your...
And what should I compare you to, The full-blown moon? Or the slumbering stars Which await the trance of our night? Of all the feelings I have...
sorry lol. i usually do.. i went back and edited. but thank you! im glad you like it! is there anything else?
Our moon soaked eyes light on the garden, Though it’s pardoned by the ill-will of society. Insanity, they say, Will spend its days In a...
I use to cut a ton when I was younger, and its still something that I struggle with. for the past 2 years I've only slipped a about 5 or 6 times....
I like this alot. I don't quite understand it, but I like it.
Any thoughts? Its nights like these That I remember you. (Where the cold and rain Press close against window-panes And silver-thin remains cling...
thank you! its all suppose to be one poem, but i tried to give it division. the few things i have written in the last year have tended to be...
Hey, I'm new here. I love writing poetry, but I havent been able to write much lately. I'm not quite sure what I think of this one yet, so I'd...
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