Alright, have to comment this now in case no-one else does and it disappears... Read this last night, and have to admit I was a little...
Love this! So short and simple, yet gets its point across. Just a thought though, a random one. I read this in the Writers Spotlight section, so...
Midnight come, and the headlights fade away Translucent fabric light transforms it all, Silence comes with the passing of the day And moth wings...
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