Vetty, it was written as shtick, in the hopes that someone would think it was a serious effort and then come in and praise me, even though it was...
Thanks, waukegan. I think the roughneck one was actually 1951, but either way, they aren't public domain, which was the critical info I needed....
I disagree with your contention about atheism. It is no belief, the absence of belief. I'm with you on the joke part, however. Every one of my...
Well, I had a hard time coming up with a rhyme for partisan. I started with aartisan, bartisan, cartisan, etc and nothing seemed to work. Then I...
When I saw the title, being a male, I'm thinking, beautiful, this is a poem about some guy deflowering chicks, awesome. But I enjoyed it...
You took the time to create a work of art, 24 people read it, and only one person prior to me commented on it. I say we gang up on those 24...
A buddy of mine, who is married to a Japanese woman, freaked out when he saw these haiku, stating that they can only be truly haiku if they are in...
There is an essential contradiction that I believe culminated in your not getting laid on the dating site. You state that you are a socialist....
You've done a nice job capturing the downside of H, but let's be honest. There's an upside, too, or people wouldn't do it. Although I've never...
Uh, I'm picking up a distinct sexual theme here, Mary!!! The title reminds me of that Seth Rogan movie that had the character named McLovin....
Good job of personifying the scarf, something everyone has or has had. Maybe personifying isn't the right word, I'm new to this poetry thing....
Good one. It ties in nicely to my own epic work entitled A Grain of Sand. Perhaps we could collaborate on an anthology about the beach some day.
I like it. You've captured the pain we all remember so well. They tried to turn us into sheep, but we outsmarted them.
Wow, you people are tough to get a comment from. Cautiously, I approach you Coiled snake in my outstretched hand I sexually insert the cable...
"Fetch me another bag of grain, woman" She had no choice For she was...the miller's wife
I've been working on this one for a few months and it's getting close to being done. Comments welcome. There are those who say I am a partisan...
This was formerly titled American Interloper, but I had to change it to America's Interloper to make it more accurate. It's about no one in...
This one's a work in progress, I can envision some changes in the future. Please advise. So insignificant, yet so ubiquitous Your cube-like...
I'm just riffing here, folks, so go easy on me. My lawn beckoned my presence in its own whimsical way The grass had long tentacles, each one...
Three fucking lines, dude? Who came up with that nonsense? That's total bullshit.
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