Well written! I have been a part of this kind of disillusionment. As painful as it is, you can take heart in the fact that you have learned from...
Your cynicism is fairly distinct, or is it realism? Kinda makes me wonder. Either way, I appreciate the irreverent humor.
I love it. Calling society on our noble rhetoric!
Thank you for your kind words! :D
You may be right. One thing is true about my mask, the older I get the less I pull it out. Some people think I'm strange and outspoken, but...
Thank you so much! I'll have to look for some of your stuff.
Hmmm... that is true! So, I will say I identify with the struggle, and the disillusionment with man-made dogma.
Ah, we are always our own worst critic! : D Plus, we grow in our writing as in ourselves. It is still okay to appreciate our beginning work,...
I love this piece! It resonates with my own heart...
Whoa... the lovely music of love! Beautiful!
This one speaks to me in a way that I cannot explain! Isn't that what good poetry is all about? : D
Great. Introspection is the key to all growth! : D
Masquerade In the dreams and potential of youth, tomorrow holds shining avenues of success and adventure. The heart is full of compassion and...
Simply beautiful, I really enjoyed this one!
Yes, that is how I feel in the mountains! All of the madness slowly dissipates...
I love the first one, there are so many various ideas blended well! Bravo!
Great flow, you have talent! I really enjoyed this poem.
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