Wings of anticipation Begin to unfold With the turn of the wheel Such sweet spontaneity. Wave goodbye to the daily grind Concrete jungle...
"a pourous memory" - marvelous analogy! Love your alliteration as well.
This reminds me of small local shows I've attended, the ones where I am awesomly surprised at a band/musician that I've never heard of and am...
"Just this... relaxing to the extremity of each feathers tip. A presence of calm abiding with awareness on each exhale." This is meditation to me...
Reading this poem was addicting once I got started I just couldn't stop. Loved how the train of thought built and went through so many emotions,...
Steffan - loved the consistent, inquisitive and insistent tone of your poem.
Cadence is good and the rhyming on time! I liked the way it sounded in my head. Morphing clouds - very good description for isn't that just...
Thanks all for taking a moment to read and share and take a tiny trip...Citrus Seas - your comment "You make me think about certain things that I...
Citrus seas - Funny you should say that as I wrote the poem for my daughter!!! I tried too look through the eyes of a child but write with bigger...
Thanks for the warm welcome - looking forward to hanging out! "All I have seen has led me to trust the Creator for all I have not seen." ~Ralph...
EmbraceInnerPeaches:"One night I melted, melted into my bed only to feel the lint buzz around my head" Etherealeyez:"Buzzing into dull drone;...
Perhaps, I too find your words intriguing, am going to look up more of your work...
Hush…the song of the crickets Whistling with the wind Lofty treetops dance before the moon. Smoke winds up to form a mystic halo Chased by...
Wonderful surprise today to stumble across this forum I've just joined. A bit about moi to give a metal picture...A rooted mama of a 7mo old girl...
A bit of both, being drawn and drawing inspiration, the ebb and flow is seen in all areas of creation. As your poem brings me closer to you and...
"Foreshadowing melts this blight of hoarfrost, as the rejuvenating breath of a glowing lover disables all defenses." I love how poetry hits...
This Morning's songbird ate a fatty worm for breakfast Clearly heard in her trills and shrills as she danced outside the window Crystal Cavern...
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