Favorite lines: "you can leave or stay there's a whisper in the madness to fly to be free"
Fiction Lately I've been feeling more beast than beauty. Out of pixie dust and trapped in Neverland, I click ruby heels and wish for home, but...
I've definitely been on a fast of sorts. Thanks for reading.
"Diamonds" is brilliant. *Wish I wrote that* moment for me! Factotum is a good read, "Baby...I'm a genius but nobody knows it but me."
I really enjoy your poetry, simple and vast, not an easy combination to achieve.
Ha! Funny! I thought your first stanza was the best, it contained the strongest imagery. I have an overwhelming urge to punctuate for clarity...
Your Ghost You still lurk in the depths of my possessions. Packed in boxes gathering dust, moved hastily in escape. Stacked erratically, not...
Haha :) thanks!
"Faith in" is left to the believer, but in the end, it's faith that matters.
Reminds me of William Carlos William's "The Red Wheelbarrow." I enjoyed it. And nice response to Maelstrom, I laughed.
Thanks for posting this!
This makes me wonder about human nature. Who are we? And why?
Do you ever do any open mic nights or readings? The way you use rhyme and alliteration makes me read your pieces aloud. Like "South Detroit,"...
And that's all the poetry you need for that moment. I have so many half written poems for people and time lost. Maybe they are incomplete...
Mislead He was vanity. Ever externally concerned. Straight machismo and Aries fire; "Fuego" they called him, of course, he burned. A bilingual...
Thanks for "getting it" guys! Helps me to know I'm not alone..
And I don't mean to discredit or downplay the moment taking place in "Death is Impotent Against Life"...
I felt like in "Death is Impotent Agains Life," you tried a little too hard to rhyme, it fell quite flat and seemed forced for me. But "Echoes"...
Funny, I'm from the north but I lived in FL for a couple years and I'd take humidity over cold any day...I can't function in the winter...I'm with...
i think #1 is my favorite :)
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