thanks for the chucklebone <grin I will have to try that (~_~) I think mine understands the english language, like a latino faking its...
allow me to think about it <grin let me get a cookie cause' I chew better when I am thinking (~_~) your poem is witty and visions of beyond seem...
the truth is as clear as a color! Your poem was inspirational~ sort of kicks the thought process in the rear and says, "read it again" <grin
vibrant poem, lured by the title, I enjoyed your write!
Circling the Square's Block To ship a box around this sphere I drove to Circle Street's Square Watched a ball rise above the horizontal line...
zmp~ Bowl of Bonsai Why do pine trees rise so high? Towering timbers awarded highest in the sky. The oaks reach outward content in their size...
exactly~ we, bound by gravity, as is a dew drop but yet evaporation brings it back to square one, heaven <grin thanks for the read/ comment (~_~)
Thank You for the read/ comment~ (~_~) bows humble~ Art
When a dew drop falls? ...that's not it at all! It races to the edge of a leaf or a rim holds for a moment calculating the wind Then dives with...
thunderous poetry... like a lightening's strike, I felt the power of the storm and the emotions you pen.
inspirational, a 'stream' of words that flowed just as simple. A very touching and beautiful write! Bonsai
The poem is strong in itself. I agree with insane... it needs more. Or perhaps even slow the pace a mite! Suggesting a mere 'gander' from another...
...shall I take a 'leap of faith' and jump into new waters? leap of faith by Bonsai on so a Grasshopper goes to leap from where it stands...
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