I awoke to find myself in a place and time unknown My soul and mind alive, with skin not my own These racing thoughts, I try to contain but...
Wow, that's pretty deep. I actually liked it a lot. keep up the good work :)
At dawn you rise above the ocean to give light to a world so dark You've kept your promises and we still do the same Confronted by the darkness -...
Aww! That's such a depressing poem. Do you write happy stuff too? I like your style, so I'd be glad to hear it if you did :)
It seems kind of like a list with a jagged flow to it, but I actually like that aspect a lot. I'm not a big fan of forced rhyming either, but I...
Don't try to complicate wording. Just write as you would verbally tell the story. Sometimes, diving into detail too deeply can get you into...
I love the first paragraph the most :)
Even though it's depressing, I like the flow of it :). Is this about a parent or something? Don't stop writing poetry!!
Hope you guys enjoy it :). it's my first time here. The taste so bitter and sweet of moving at 100 miles per hour We've Got three more days...
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