Empty vase at the back of the cupboard We have a lot in common You and me. Blind people feed us, but there is nothing left to feed. Just a few...
Spiralling fog shack Tornado gnawing savagely at the soul Will the little Indians bite through with red teeth? I am alone, with heavy stomach My...
The last line is intriguing... I like the way you compare your need for her to an umbilical cord. Keep writing!
Thank-you! To get such great comments is really encouraging and motivating. Now to write about something happy...
Thanks, that's very kind of you! I tried to imagine myself in the situation of going through a painful and complicated divorce, I'm glad if it...
I think most people could understand the feelings conveyed in this poem, they are universal human feelings. I really liked: "i want to sink my...
Thank you for commenting, I couldn't part with the second stanza as it is the 1st one I wrote for this poem! Perhaps I should try and improve it...
I am the night on a wall A cold dark Thing Inside a cupboard somewhere I am words below a grave Promises trodden in the mud A kiss that...
as i gaze at skies of predictable iron, solid and firm, bland and tame, and sub-consciously absorb the patterns of tedious stars, i wonder if you...
Great. I loved the last two stanzas. I didn't really like the first stanza, mainly because it isn't very original so didn't conquer up any images...
I know the feeling of not going anywhere in life- feeling that everything you do is useless because it won't make a difference. That's the message...
I really like it! The whole of the developed world is obsessed with time- why can't we just live? Out of interest, what made you think of the idea?
[img]Self-worth measured by the inches of background around your silhouette, Nothing else matters. Everywhere you look, go, see, promotion of...
At the moment I am a lacto ovo vegetarian but after reading up on veganism I am very keen to give this lifestyle a go. However, there are a few...
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