A Dying Dream

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LenaSilk, Oct 12, 2025.

  1. LenaSilk

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    Stumbled onto some old stuff that I wrote more than 10 years ago. This is my imitation of Edgar Allan Poe, something 'Spirits Of the Dead' but darker.


    A Dying Dream

    Lost and old she sees herself
    Lurking in the light of youth
    Hope is rotting in the shell
    of all she's ever held as truth.
    With sightless eyes and scalding tears
    She crumbles through an endless night
    Calling, knowing none can hear
    Her broken wings betraying flight.

    Winter lasted far too long
    Her bones grew brittle from the cold
    What once was right has turned to wrong
    And nothing else can save her soul.
    She'll drown inside her dying dream
    Feel every promise turn to dust
    And as she dies she'll hear them scream
    'She's only like the rest of us.'
     
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