a midnight of smoke

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Oct 11, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    dim dreams disturbed, you think,
    "was it me, was it a more meaningful thing?"
    well seek that for yourself... or else

    a midnight of smoke within mystical hoax
    chanting forbidden words will call upon you
    for tomorrow farewells

    and that rallying cry
    tuned into philosophical lure,
    bloodshot eyes, burning, blur
    and still... can't you tell

    magnets upset,
    east becomes west,
    grim ghosts advance and grin
    at your isolated smell

    until sunlight triggers optical nerve
    to reverse the spiral, release the submersed,
    so learn the lesson well:

    grey stays along an orbiting star
    and colors dawn until becoming dark;
    there's no sense to rebel.
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    ohhh i just love the way you wrapped this up...

    beautiful!
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    This is most awesome. Really enjoyed it...thanks!
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    This translated onto a very personal level in my head. Ty much.
     
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