A Pause for Thought

Frame a thought in a picture
The picture is your sole
The thought is one of beauty
The frame is dark and bold

How bold can your life be
When all you do is wrong
The sillence is sarenity
When the wrongfull things are done

Hand your thought in a gallery
A galery of dreams
Dream your thought out lovingly
And see it for what it seems

If it seems too tainted
Too Misty or too faint
Turn The mist to mistic wonder
And the faintness into light

The light will warm your entity
Surrounding it with care
Your care will take you far away
From the troubles that you bare.

 

I think it's a good poem, I like the meter to it. Just some spelling issues.

 

I like it as well.

I like the theme, and the creativity of how you carry it out.

It has a softness and gentleness about it, which goes well with the subject of the poem.

 

Sorry about the spelling guys I'm dislexic. I know there is a thing called a spell checker. but that doesn't realy help. glad you like it though

 

Great poem. Most of the dyslexic people I know are really intelligent, creative people

 

I think it's a lovely poem...good stuff : )