A Single Rose

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Saje, Nov 19, 2004.

  1. Saje

    Saje Member

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    This is another poem that I wrote awhile ago. Not everyone likes it but I'm proud of it...

    A Single Rose

    She leaves her house one day
    On a journey she goes.
    She hasnÕt been outside
    In how long no one knows.

    Her neighbour turns his head
    And plucks a blooming rose.
    He has much work to do
    But he wonders where she goes.

    She walks along the maple street
    There is no shame that shows.
    Her head is held up high
    Back straight in homemade clothes.

    Townsfolk gossip and stare
    They wonder where she goes.
    Chin high and shoulders proud
    Legs cloaked in silken hose.

    "Where is it that youÕre going?"
    An old widowÕs voice crows.
    On an important journey
    Of which only she knows.

    She passes the schoolyard
    Children strike a taunting pose.
    She turns her glare upon them
    And instantly they froze.

    She comes across the butcher
    Hanging his meat in rows.
    "Where is it that youÕre going?"
    He wonders what she knows.

    She doesnÕt stop to talk
    Faithfully on she goes.
    SheÕs on a special journey
    Knowing what she knows.

    Up ahead she sees the church
    That special house God chose.
    The minister works inside
    Listening to peopleÕs woes.
    She doesnÕt like that man
    ItÕs his own whistle he blows.
    Standing safely preaching
    Down upon rows and rows.

    She reaches the edge of town
    On her face it shows
    The journey has reached its end
    Of which only she knows.

    In a field not far away
    A birch tree always grows.
    ItÕs time she stops and rests
    On a cheek a tear flows.

    Her road is at an end
    She nurses ancient woes.
    An old piece of paper
    From her pocket she pulls.

    ItÕs faded ink cries out
    A dead loves promising prose.
    Of years that they will have
    A broken future she now knows.

    Under that old birch tree
    She places a single rose.
    And lays down beside it
    Knowing what she knows.
     
  2. Saje

    Saje Member

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    I don't know what's going on with those apostrophes they didn't show up like that in the message box!
     
  3. StickyPoohy

    StickyPoohy Member

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    Don't worry about that!
    Am I right in hearing a hip-hop/rap influence there?
    Nice humour, anyway, in both poems...


    S
     
  4. Rapturous Love

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  5. soliloquy

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    I love it!! But what does she know. Real !!!!!!!!
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    In the maple-leaves the sun glitters and shines, warming the spirits and adding a lightness of step, for this soul knows that all forms merge with earth and all energetic signatures merge with light. The roots of the birch go as deep as tendrils of her loves memory into the soil of her heart. A rose separated from the branch draws no longer on the light and seeks solace in the oneness of the soil. Maple knows both rose and lover in both roots and leaves... as do you.

    Thank you for sharing your touching poem.
     
  7. Saje

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    That's beautiful, sylvanlighting! All you too, I imagine.
    Thanks
     

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