All Will Come

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Jul 8, 2006.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    Spread thin
    A million balls in the air
    Impossible follow-through
    Fragmented frustration
    Held so close
    Then slipped away

    Lost in the stinging haze
    Of the bright and burning day
    Oh warm well spirit come again
    Release me from my
    Angered anguish


    Once I dwelled in decadence
    When this realm was new
    Completion is now seldom and few
    Now I wallow in my pool of regret
    Coiled in shades of my own abandonment


    I lay fire
    To my aborted creations
    Ash thrown to the cleansing wind
    Deprived from your prying eyes
    You know it’s better
    This way


    For I offer only
    The most genuine of wordscapes
    Let it go
    Try to escape

    Focus on absent nothingness
    Forget order
    And structure
    All will come
    In time
     
  2. janis89

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    uh...interesting..are you a poet?
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I like it man, the last lines are pretty moving. Focus on the Void, for it is the source of the All. :)
     
  4. TheLizardKingMike

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    Why yes I am. One who writes poetry is indeed a poet. If you were asking if I am a professional poet, the answer is no.
     
  5. janis89

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    Yes,it was my question. Even if you're not a professional one,your poetries are really good
     
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