And the heavens smiled...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Straw, Apr 17, 2006.

  1. Jack Straw

    Jack Straw Member

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    Did you see the morning sky?
    Orange and red hues colliding on the horizon.
    Awe, tranqulity time stood still as I drove
    On this early April morning
    A spring sunrise.

    Did you see the western evening sky?
    A setting star imbued with violet and crimson swirls
    My eyes grew large, wistfully contemplating
    the power of nature
    a summer's sunset.

    Silent darkness illuminated by fiery pinpoints.
    The lucidity of the early AMs draws me out to my porch
    I can't help but smile as I inhale the sweet smoke of cancer
    and I gaze up at the cosmos.
    Enjoying the beauty of simplicity on this incandescent night.

    And the heavens smiled...
    while I wept tears of joy
    I was high on reverment
    among other things
    grinning widely, wildly
    uncontrollably
    invoked by things not created by man
    and the heavens smiled...
     
  2. bbbeccaaa

    bbbeccaaa 12345678910

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    wow, that's really beautiful. i love the words you use. they create perfect images of what you're saying.
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I agree, this was a joy to read. :)
     
  4. Jack Straw

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    it was a joy to write also =). I got the idea on the way to school at sunrise last week.
     
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