Only thing that keeps you sane is that there are any number of girls and they all have two legs and everything in between. It's that void keeps you sane. I enter and I am a bailiff taking moments of pleasure because you weren't quick enough to say no because I pay the rent and you don't.
i liked this. it's a bit off kilter, but that works. i would cut the lines "it's that void/keeps you sane," they dont really do much for the rest of the poem and i think they kind of interrupt the flow. the piece would be much stronger without them. i really like your ending...
