Beyond Fortress Europa

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    Nice....:)
    Thanks for the story again FE has returned and protector Puskin is here once again
     
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    cool - lookin forward to it
     
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    Thanks lads. This is my present to all my friends. It's a community story, and all those who contribute to the writers forum will have a part in it as a character, even dare I say it... ronald Macdonald (who is a sweetheart really). I will try and update the story as much as I can, but it's not always easy, as you all know. Now that my work is more in demand and I have to meet deadlines, sometimes I'm pushed, but I'll try and with your encouragement and support, hopefully this project will grow into something very special for our forum community.

    EDIT: additional information update.
    Thanks to the feedback and suggestions from you, the readers of "Beyond Fortess Europa", I have been able to include links to within the forum for the encyclopedia (which helps explain language differences, items, and historical events in the sci-fi saga) and also a list of all the characters with a brief description. This becomes invaluable in the later episodes when the plot thickens. Also, somewhere around episode 20, I have started keeping a summary of the "story so far", for every 5 episodes to help you keep track of events. Once again, thank you for these great and practical suggestions. This is a great example of how this forum can be helpful to all writers, new and old, to become masters in their art.
     
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    get on with it and cut the waffle i havent had a good laugh in ages
     
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    You can rest assured that I've got a nice juicy part for you, Ron. It will probably be the most bizarre character ever invented.
     
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    i remember fortress europa was just getting good, or atleast complicatedly interesting, with some sort of spy versus spy versus spy versus who knows what all for sure little seemingly impromptu, or at least unexpected little mini-war going on in some museum somewhere the last installment of it i got to read before the site it was on seemed to have gotten domain name claim jumped, which in a way seemed almost in keeping with the crazyness going on, though i'm sure it wasn't planned that way.

    at any rate, seeing this mention of it makes me wonder if there's more been written and if it's up on line somewhere to be read more of.

    =^^=
    .../\...
     
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    Thanks themnax, you can rest assured that I'm warming up to get the thing going again. I might change a few things, but the majority of the characters will be there. Perhaps even a few new ones;) You are certainly one of the main players.
     
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    I cant wait....:)
    I need my fix
     
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    I have to get one of those....:)
    nice story WS I wonder what the powers that be have in storage for us this time....
     
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    can you make the story all about me like you promised, so far its a bit boring as you havent mentioned me at all, i think several hundred people would read this story if it was entirely about me and how interesting i am and what a great writer I am. at least seven thoussand words should be about me
     
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    that does sound like fun. also almost scarry considering the dream i recently had about a couple of mage construct avatars going by the names of 'sausage' and 'biscuit'. very very very interesting.

    (sausage, who was this levitating sculpture of wrot iron with what apperared to be living wolfs head on top of it kept pelting me with what seemed like hackysack balls but biscuit then challanged him and i managed to teleport out of there back to mundane wakefulness while he was thus distracted)

    =^^=
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    You are so right, in the future, men will use hair remover to deal with facial hair. Also why would men have a "back crack n sack" using wax when hair remover can do it, I dont understand, WS you are definitely alluding to the future where men remove facial hair with hair removing cream, not razor, and have a brazilian turkey shop
     
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    hold my nuts?
    Is that like "deal or no deal" ?

    what do you get if religion is mixed with "the price is right"?

    "JESUS CHRIST, COME ON DOWN" !!!!
     
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    LOL. It's not as good as that, but I've started an Encyclopedia Europa which explains a lot of the terminology and language used in the saga. Hold-My-Nuts is already in there if you want to take a look.

    If anyone has any question, or suggestion, I would be quite happy to include it in the Encyclopedia if it helps.

    Thanks guys and girls. More Fortress Europa coming soon.
     
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