Blazing soul, wind blown minds.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sitareric, Oct 8, 2005.

  1. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Moving in the shadows
    the shadows of my mind
    my soul ablaze burning in my core
    I look around, up and down the streets
    The rain pouring through me.

    What i once found is no longer there,
    Into the air you go, you say you dont see me anymore.
    I say it's easy "I'm here!! I'm here!!"

    You want to be like a passing cloud in the skies that colour my life,
    Skies of everyshade of blue.
    You say you no longer want to fight.
    In my soul im settled.
    In my soul I now move among the shadows,
    Never to return to uncover the fright that will last a lifetime.
    It all depends on what you choose,
    you had the power to bring me closer to god,
    you would never have to worry, underneath or on top.
    You say you no longer want to fight, but the fight is all i see, when i look into your cosmic eyes.
    The eyes that once held the story of surpassing the boundries of time.

    I know your more than that,
    I know you move like me,
    into the knowledge once known but forgotten,
    born into this world the same, not the circumstances but the drive
    now youve gone away.
    My soul infinitly dynamic, continues to reach across those skies, now without you.
    AUM forgotten, will you ever come back to me.
    I cant hold on to it, I have to move now in the shadows of my mind, the fire lights, from the blaze in my soul, the constant drive.
     
  2. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    oh thats beautifully written, i love it
     
  3. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Wow.. haha.. i wrote that in one go in about 5 minutes..
    now when i look back on it... wow...
     
  4. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    huh..... reminds me of some of my stuff......... if you ever get a good collection of your stuff together id like to read it....... it fascinates me how our poetry can be so similar and the experiences conveyed so alike........ i love your stuff ..... it hits hard with me..... damn keep it up
     
  5. sitareric

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    Thats really amazing! I always write with alot of periods like that too:)
     
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    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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