What do u see in me? Why r u attracted to me? Am I the epitomy of what u would want ur ultimate woman to be? Do u see drive and determination? Ambition through strife? Do I have what it takes to be the 1 with whom you'll spend ur life? Is my attitude positive? Is my temperment mild? Do I have the qualities as a woman to be the mother of ur child? Do I represent myself with class? Am I expressive with my sex? At the sound of my voice, can i make ur manhood flex? Do u enjoy seeing me 1st in the morning? R u satisfied that i'm the last face u see at nite? Do u love me unconditionally even though we argue and fight? Do u enjoy letting ur hands explore my body? Do u enjoy how I use my tongue and my lips? Do I sexually stimulate u when iI rotate and gyrate my hips? Do I satisfy your appetite? Be it sexually or with food? When I cook a good meal for u, can it get u in the mood? Do u like conversating with me? Do u like that I am smart? Can I say the type of words that could really touch ur heart? Am I the woman u can't be without? Can u go on without hearing my voice or seeing my face? Do u mind that I have come into ur life and invaded ur space? Do u love ur mother? Love and respect her with all ur heart? Is she the one woman with whom u will never be torn apart? When we are enjoying each other physically, Are we just having F@ckin' sex? Or are there feelings involved that makes it more complex? Are u happy that I am with u? Will u read my poem until the end? Are u my lover, better yet, are u my friend? I am asking u these questions To find out how u feel I want to make sure that whatever we have Is something that is real U don't have to be in love with me now But I hope that one day u will Because i fell in love with u early And til this day....i love u still __________________
I like your poem. But I fail to see how this portion is related to the rest: The entire poem was asking him about you, and all of a sudden this pops in.
I think she just wanted to make sure that "he" wouldn't let his mother come between them. just poetic, I like the way your work flows. It's raw, and sometimes edgy, but it is a good read, with identifiable subject matter. How long have you been writing poetry?
