Echos

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sara_rose, Apr 29, 2005.

  1. sara_rose

    sara_rose Ice Queen

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    Echos





    It was a cold dark night

    And the streets were winded

    With the blackened light

    I walked there blinded



    On a stone sat a weeping child

    In the corner a mourning mother

    On a hill was a man who smiled

    He didn’t even bother



    The echoing voices of the past

    Filled my ears as I awoken

    With knowledge I had been blessed

    And no longer felt so broken



     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Beautiful, simply beautiful
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I shall give you aid on your journey, in just such a way: puncuation and syntax:



     
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