Empty love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EmbraceInnerPeaches, Jun 16, 2005.

  1. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    embrace the breeze
    when it comes
    nothings there
    except for emptyness
    through your tangled hair
    and on your sweeten'd lips
    drips juice from the apple tree...
    Like poison and honey
    lemon and lime
    it attracts the world
    to create crime
    but for only to touch those candied lips
    brush them against your fingertips
    if only to incite riot
    to wipe away the sultry wind...
    so willing to give up all that they own
    his passions ignited his love has grown
    only to feel the cruel sword of reject
    as it is there only to disect..... to pull out youre insides and eat upon your flesh
    it festers and destroys
    every crevice every bone every inch and every stone
    nothing left untouched, only dying embers of an old passion can remain
    as you bite into the wind... as you click your teeth together Youve gone insane...
    and why shouldnt you, all thats left is ashes
    of the ones you let burn you
    if only the world were truly alive
    ...then you wouldnt have died
    so soon
    all roads lead to death
    even the ones that are invisible...
    nobody is free from this pain
    of feeling to gain love
    no one is free from trying to gain love
    one plus two is three..........death plus love equals free..
     
  2. RxHEAD

    RxHEAD Member

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    Graphically Intense intertwined with post mortem abstract type of guessing game. 'no one is free from trying to gain love"?

    That really is the only part doesn't really fit in for me I am already dead long ago and the freedom being equal of my death plus love has left me no longer on a quest for love as is does not for me any longer exist in me. Ive died the death in 32 years twice which is enough love for me. No intention of setting my self up for number three as that would be the one to rip me into shreds and permanantly take away the reality which I still manage to barely keep somewhere in me. rx
     
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