Like a never ending story I dream a different dream about you every night Its you, you're the one Its not bad to admit cause i love you every bit like the cool wind on a hot day you take my breath away i want to kniow you want to get inside you but you're a rock you wont move Ill wait forever til you love me teach me to understand cause all i wanna do is be your woman let me get near you let me understand, my fellow friend
The sentiment is sweet yet a little creepy. There's a good balance there. The language flows nicely I like the way that the rhyme is irregular. Seems to reflect the feelings portrayed. Xowie xxx
ty guys I wrote this one today...a period in my life i did not like but i loved it while it lasted....i think its pretty simple to figure out... As the moist comes up I feel her touch the first day of relief is the first day thats going to kill me you were so little and so young from that day, i was ready for you, little one It took me days t figure you out but as i came to a conclusion you were gone and out A little bit more of a life in me and a lot of hope then its spirit is gone like an adict on dope i still think about you today Ill recreate you in time but only more of you instead.
