Flowing words

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Aug 30, 2006.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Twisting, turning, meandering around.
    The words bumpingand shovingeachother
    CAN'T-GET-OUT-FAST-ENOUGH from this body.
    Flowing from my brain through my fingers
    and onto this computer screen
    Into the vast sea of the internet.
    From my screen to yours.
    From my eyes to yours and into your brain.
    I'M IN YOUR HEAD.
    MY WORDS ARE THERE!
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Jumping, twisting, turning
    running all about with no destination
    and no end in sight.

    Just a pretty word or two
    something to impress upon you.
    See, I can write after all!

    Flowing freely from my fingertips
    Ripping out with no constraint
    Grab a thesaurus for extra help.

    Writing empty words, devoid of meaning
    along with passages which contain my soul.
    Can't tell the bullshit from my heart.

    Words ooze just like butter
    spread and smeared across the screen.
    Can't seem to stop my head from pouring

    out these phrases like buckets of rain.
    Someone, please stop me now
    before I get carried away

    and reveal too much of me
    to too many folks who
    won't understand the creature which is Kim.

    peace and love
     
  3. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Live the good life and you're okay.
    Deviate from the plan and you should be scorned
    by everyone who can see you.
    Be an individual, shame on you.
    Why can't you blend into a crowd?
    You're hair is matted and nasty.
    Just cut and style it like those other folks.
    Why do you try to be so different?
    Why can't you be normal like me?

    It is now time for my retort.
    I like my hair in dreads,
    it's not a fashion statement
    but rather, an anti-statement.
    My clothes may not look like
    hers or his, but these threads
    are much more comfortable and
    socially friendly. They aren't made
    from the sweat of children as young as 6.
    My life is more complete than most.
    I am happy with me and
    that is more than what most
    "normal" people can claim to be.

    Peace and love
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    To my beautiful muse,
    you inspire my words and thoughts
    that flow from my heart and soul,
    like a fresh mountain stream on it's
    journey to an unknown land and sea.

    Your eyes flicker like fireflies in the
    vast abyss, my muse.
    Your presence sends chills up and down
    my spine, arms, and legs and I am
    helpless to your charm.

    You surround me with positive energy
    which allows my writings to exist.
    You provide the safe enviroment that
    I need to bare my heart and soul to the world
    and you won't let them hurt me.

    You are my sunshine, my moon, my stars
    You are my Buddhist Cosmos,
    thousands of worlds which we cannot
    begin to comprehend. Only you can.

    Peace and love
     
  5. AerialReaver

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    These were all good. I really like the first one. I've felt like that before. Like I have too much to say and not enough time to say it.
     
  6. maddy123

    maddy123 Member

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    ya ^he is right
     
  7. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Dirty sandals, dirty shoes,
    dirty sneakers, how bout you?
    We begin and we end.
    Repetition is the key.
    Get up every morning,
    drag yourself to class.
    Fill your belly full of food.
    Smoke a cigarette ten times a day.
    Hop on your bike and ride to work.
    Ride home and jump in bed.
    Rinse, lather, repeat.
    Repetition is the key.
    the key, The Key, THE KEY!!!
     
  8. Oren

    Oren Member

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    Wow...all of them...amazing, the first, very literal and awesome, I loved...but especially the last...wow...holy shit man, excellent, excellent, excellent...
     
  9. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    this is great { just this emotion of the moment...}
    and your words will always be there,once a person reads the seeds are there like upon the screen ..
    lovenpeace from saff
     
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