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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ness33, Feb 21, 2011.

  1. ness33

    ness33 Member

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    I mostly hang around the opiate section but i also have a few poems i thought i would share with you all.

    A tiny niche in the universe:
    Exploration in every avenue
    What is there left for me to pursue
    The ego in my head
    rings loud and clear
    It says
    “your problem is fear”
    truth be spoken
    my conscious’s
    little token
    indecisive and overwhelmed
    burdened by uncertainty
    is this the right path for me?
    I ask aloud
    distant and proud
    “Where is my niche in the universe
    a clear path for my soul to immerse?”


    Realms behind the rain:
    Exploring doors of eternity
    piercing the atmosphere
    white fluffy clouds drift
    into our rear-view mirror
    new moments of solitude
    between latitude and longitude
    we ignited a love and marked our X
    candlit, kissing, and sex
    zipped up and where gone, accidently
    leaving God’s bathroom light on
    sweet aromas of pursuit
    growing from branches which took root
    in a handful of dark soil
    the earth bubbles to a boil
    manifesting its own energy
    never to be created or exported
    natural cycles left contorted
    sending our spirits
    into a different dimension
    where we danced with the sun
    strutted with the stars
    made love on mars
    passed out and
    crashed into the earth
    generating a universal re-birth
    flirting with the power
    to bloom a feeling into a flower
    treasures buried deep
    between heaven and hell
    an auction of opportunity
    With our souls for sell.


    I have many more...just picked out a few of my more recent poems. Hope you all can relate.
     
  2. Cleansedreality

    Cleansedreality Member

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    I really dig both of them dude. The first poem is great with all of the truth embezzled in it. I read the second passage as song lyrics for some reason... oh wait I just blazed nevermind hahaha
     
  3. lovelyxmalia

    lovelyxmalia Banana Hammock Lifetime Supporter

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    Love those poems! You are very abstract in your style of writing and I really like how I can relate to them on a level where I have to think more...great job!
     
  4. ness33

    ness33 Member

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    Thank you both for your insight. I really appreciate it.
     
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