For your reading pleasure

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bobulon, Oct 30, 2005.

  1. Bobulon

    Bobulon Member

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    I see some sad things
    Autumn meloncolly day
    Playing by the rules.


    scream Havok control
    blazing winter sun shine rays
    burnt ice Rocket-pop.


    Insanities end
    blooming evergreen mountains
    You better kiss her.

    Don't taunt the Phoenix
    Super Happy Sunshine Luck
    desert Drugs are fun.


    I hope you enjoyed.

    PS. What the alphabet would sould like without Q&R
     
  2. Sininabin

    Sininabin Member

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    haiku happnyness
    Always a fun thing to do
    good job and thank you

    the alphabet would be screwy
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    my favorite, that last line rules. beautifully surreal work, enjoyed the images I got :)
     
  4. Bobulon

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    Thank You, I've just recently started to gain confidence in my 'work'. having your poetry put down for years kind of takes the joy out writing ^_^ thanks again for the feedback!
     
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