From dust to dust

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bluesafire, Jun 3, 2008.

  1. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    Ashes from a log that burned
    Rubble in the place where once
    Some children learned
    Dust to dust
    This could be one of us

    Great empires that rose and fell
    Once mighty strong but now
    Of their remains not much to tell
    From dust to dust
    They were like us

    A civilization built on greed
    So many hungry mouths
    Yet only few allowed to feed
    They too end up as dust
    Not unlike us

    The earth continues to revolve
    While on its surface
    Humans struggle to evolve
    As dust evolves to dust
    And so we must

    Great drama this, the plight of man
    Full of importance,
    Full of plans,
    Mere seconds pass from birth to death
    A story captured in a breath

    Upon the wind the dust will blow
    When all is quiet on the earth below
    Despite our biggest, loud Kaboom
    We will expire awefully soon
    And life will travel here once more
    Through other doors, on other shores,

    Through avenues as yet unknown
    Perhaps through species
    Not too much unlike our own
    Yet too, will they end up as us
    From dust to dust to dust.

    ~bluesafire
     
  2. sethm13

    sethm13 Member

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    Very nice. I really like the emotion of the poem. Great job. I never realized how many great poets there were on this site.
     
  3. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    talented, I liked the word usage. Kept me reading until the end. I agree to, their are many talented writers on here.
     
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