fulfillment

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Alixi, Apr 27, 2007.

  1. Alixi

    Alixi Member

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    fulfillment is like

    an ever-elusive thought.

    it swifts and darts

    between every crevice and

    opening-

    when you need it to stand still.

    it slicks

    and slides between every good chance

    that passes you by.

    until it's to late

    and it's gone forever.

    and your old

    and decrepit and ill-

    it will look in your window

    smile, wave, and keep walking onward

    away from you

    away from your dreams

    into blissful eternity

    forever.
     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I like this poem. It's so true. Good job :)
     
  3. dylanzeppelin

    dylanzeppelin daydream believer

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    away from your dreams,
    into blissful eternity.


    love that ending. it ends it on the right note.
     
  4. Alixi

    Alixi Member

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    :D thanks.
     

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