"Goodbye"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by A_Lonely_Road, Aug 16, 2007.

  1. A_Lonely_Road

    A_Lonely_Road Member

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    "Goodbye"




    I remember
    dripping ice cream onto
    freshly scraped knees.

    building fairy houses.

    having nowhere to go
    but everywhere to explore.

    riding my bike until dark.

    playing hopscotch, if even by myself.

    thinking 28 was old.

    I remember
    a lifetime a go when I had
    my whole lifetime.

    Heart, I tell you: "Hurt me no more,
    Even though you must and always will betray."

    Goodbye innocence.

    © Heather Bush


    This poem is copyrighted.
     
  2. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    break those habits, those patterns of "life".

    know that you don't know,
    that there's always why?

    life, a process of growth and expansion.
    stay in one place and face stagnation.

    innocence sits on a confused face,
    in awe but still able to keep up the pace.

    say hello to your innocence everyday:
    you don't know how you got here,
    why things are this way.

    you say goodbye to your innocence,
    but it's here to stay-
    no matter how far down you hid it away.

    you've gathered a nice bag of tricks along the way,
    but you haven't changed,
    you're weighed down by the bag,
    you've let your pace lag,
    let go.
     
  3. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    i wanted to tell you that i really like your poem. you translated a universal feeling to language, and that's what i consider art. double kudos.
     
  4. A_Lonely_Road

    A_Lonely_Road Member

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    haha...thanks. :D The one you posted here, that was well worth the read. I rather liked it. It painted a picture with words.
     
  5. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    This was a good read. For some reason, it brought a tear to my eye.

    By the way, great signature.
     
  6. A_Lonely_Road

    A_Lonely_Road Member

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    Thanks to both. :D
     
  7. elayne

    elayne no longer available

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    Good job, you took me back in time, I could almost smell the barn in our backyard.
     
  8. elayne

    elayne no longer available

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    OMG, I love it! I could chew on this one for hours!
    Your style is deep and compelling. Keep writing.
     
  9. A_Lonely_Road

    A_Lonely_Road Member

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    Again, thanks to all. :D
     
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