Haiku for a dead man, from a school desk

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by make art not war, Nov 23, 2005.

  1. make art not war

    make art not war Member

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    You lucky bastard,
    You hang with Gods in Heaven,
    while I sit in Hell
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    haha, based on my memories of school, this is truth. ;)
     
  3. make art not war

    make art not war Member

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    ain't it true, man
     
  4. AcousticPeace

    AcousticPeace Member

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    its so true
     
  5. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    hahaha, its awesome. :D
     
  6. Psychopsilocybin

    Psychopsilocybin Member

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    ha, that's cute. I love haikus. :D
     
  7. Corvuspirit

    Corvuspirit Member

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    excellent
     
  8. nitemarehippygirl

    nitemarehippygirl Senior Member

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    hahahahahaha............ that was so great. =)
     
  9. Fractual_

    Fractual_ cosmos factory

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    the teachers greed is contagious, but its not working anymore...
    they spread the disease that lifts no body out of no thing...
    but they care not, for in the eyes of the man and a piece of paper, their considered smart,
    they have power and a small cash flow they like to waste and abuse,
    and yell at us when it takes them deeper into their nowhere,
    they must be dis satisfied with some part of their own life,
    as they struggle for power amongst the weak and open,
    in my world they don't know as much as they'd like to think,
    and my world now is turning elsewhere beyond this greedy game where nothing is gained,
    perhaps they will find me elsewhere someday, where my spirit rests in fantasy and ever-growing love???
     
  10. make art not war

    make art not war Member

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    Thank all of you!
     
  11. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    though im just restating what everyone has said already i do agree that is totally true nice one...oh and wonderfull tribute to a wonderfull drummer
    -floyd (kaivon)
     

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