heres a lil something

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jointman69, Jun 3, 2005.

  1. Jointman69

    Jointman69 High Nigga Pie

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    feel free to comment, its kind of like half freestyle half poem if that makes any sense...im tryin to deal with some shit right now and usually i jsut blast music to get mind off things and then i end up freestyling. its not that good but what can i say its a little emotional for my usual flow.

    man its been a long day
    fate dealt me my hand the wrong way
    straight up emotions are hurt
    theres blood on my shirt
    as feet dig in the dirt
    head is going berzerk
    why was i placed on this earth
    if not to discover rebirth
    born again sinner still sins
    my soul is garbage overflowin the bin
    everytime i began
    i have to start over again
    Fate is an enemy who doesnt give a fuck
    ive done all i can except nail myself up
    so now your leavin me stuck
    heart on my sleeve down the center's your cut.
     
  2. syd

    syd Banned

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    Pretty cool poetry there:)
     
  3. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    its really good, heartfelt and raw. also the insanity makes sense in this context because its readable...it makes the madness more understandable.
     
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