Here's one of mine.....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by FlowerChildJoplin, Apr 20, 2005.

  1. FlowerChildJoplin

    FlowerChildJoplin Member

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    woke up realizing spring was here
    and I had forgotten to wash myself clean of last night's blood
    got my scars hidden so mama wouldn't see
    let's say I broke a promise
    to my body and to me
    the portrait of the eternal
    she stares at herself with longing
    to be better
    oh baby I wanna heal
    Ooh baby I wanna be real again
    ooh baby I wanna go where the stardust and moonlight were my friends
    but the scars here remind me of the days there was no sun
    this empty heart shaped box
    this shirt
    this ring I nolonger wear
    reminds me of the night
    when my Romeo didn't come

    remembering the days when we sang in the fields
    the sunlight
    dancing in the flowers
    the rain fell down and hit his face
    in my memory it turned to blood
    the days when my heart wasn't left in the mud
    riding the carousel of time
    ups and downs
    time around
    Oh baby I wanna heal
    Ooh baby I wanna be real again
    ooh baby I wanna go where the stardust and the moonlight were my friends
    but the scars here remind me of the days there was no sun
    this empty heart shaped box
    this shirt
    this ring I nolonger wear
    reminds me of the night when my Romeo didn't come

    ooh baby come and save me
    ooh or leave so I can save myself
    traveling back to the sunlight
    chasing the horizon with you my flower boy
    I turn round and there's only my shadow to be seen now
    now the blood makes me think of the days we were apart
    where'd ya go mah darling?
    where'd you put my heart?
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    What do you guys think? I have a lot more if anyone's interested later
     
  2. wingedtriangle

    wingedtriangle Member

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    oh my shakespearean flower child lover.......
     
  3. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    Ok, that is so awsome!!! yOU ARE ONE OF US, THE TALENTED THINKERS THAT No one understands!! But, there is oly one Jim morrison, but hes cute!! Far out peotry, keep em coming!
     
  4. beerman1788

    beerman1788 Member

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    that was a spiritual journey of words .. it was poetic genius.


    yea dude their is only 1 jim morrison and he was a lot cooler than you
     

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