Hummingbird

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LorienLord, Jul 7, 2009.

  1. LorienLord

    LorienLord Member

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    Last fall a woman who owns a local flower shop called me over....apparently a hummingbird who was attracted by her flowers got trapped inside her shop....she said the poor bird tried to get out for hours but couldn't find the door....finally came to rest on a beam in the ceiling of her shop....I took a ladder and climbed up to it....I was worried it would fly away....but it let me cup my hands around it and take it outside....I opened my hands but it just lay there looking at me....I stroked its head and back and it closed its eyes....I thought it had died.....suddenly it opened its eyes....looked at me....and then flew off into the sky....it touched me like no other living creature has touched me before.



    Hummingbird

    Iridescent wings
    no longer take flight
    trapped within this darkness
    where your day has turned to night
    and you ask why the sun
    has hid his face from you
    now all you have are memories
    of the sky where you once flew
    fading hope dies within your breast
    for you have nowhere left to go
    beating heart, beating wings
    in fear begin to slow
    as silently you accept your fate
    no longer do you try to fly
    sometimes it's much harder to live
    than to just give up and die
    so place yourself within my hands
    and let me hold your pain
    rest awhile and catch your breath
    and then take flight again.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Graceful ~~*
     
  3. caliente

    caliente Senior Member

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    A very powerful image ... a wild thing that has lost its freedom. Nice writing :)
     
  4. Adaydreamer

    Adaydreamer Banned

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    I love hummingbirds! I really connected to this. It was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
     
  5. onlyanegg

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    a most excellent lesson!

    Thank you very much :)
     

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