I wrote this carelessly

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by spinelli, Jul 13, 2004.

  1. spinelli

    spinelli Member

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    I wrote this carelessly the other night and I just read it again and I love it
    I can't stop reading it!

    Our Love
    Forever in my soul
    our love continues,
    lives and works
    for all that is
    Your eyes, your smile
    fuel the eternal flame
    of adore
    of content
    of love

    You gave me strength
    you give me faith
    you gave me hope
    you showed me myself
    you gave directions to a lost heart
    You did and still guide me
    towards the light
    through your light

    I thankyou
    I thankyou for your support,
    your strength
    your weakness which gives me strength,
    your lessons which cause me pain,
    your pain which teach me lessons

    Your love which is my Love
    Our love
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    *Bravo* I'm feeling the love :)
    <3 Moonjava
     
  3. mebesideme

    mebesideme Member

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    That was VERY beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it, and will be saving it to my faves for later rereadings.
     
  4. MarkN

    MarkN Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    excellant spin!:)
     
  5. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    i love when that happens. makes me so proud of my own writing :)
     
  6. Lunatic_Fireball

    Lunatic_Fireball Member

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    2 Thumbs up for this...very very nice.
     
  7. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

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    very niiiiice :D
     

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